Angel of Death

Hello there Ten! Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy it here because this really is a great writing community. Well anyways, I'm Angel of Death but every calls me ...

No! It mustn't end here...now. Ah, shoot. I wish I read this slowly. Please, I hope you post the next chapter soon? Anyways, I think this was another one of ...

Note: I haven't written poetry in a long long time it seems but I just felt inspired today so rip it apart and I appreciate all reviews and comments. And ...

Hey there! I quite liked this poem and am glad to see that you didn't stress a rhyming scheme, you just let the words flow and this is really beautiful. ...

8. I don't think I'll be a writer in this lifetime My mum says that I'll never finish a book because I'm always starting over or getting new ideas. Ideas ...

Hey there Writer! One of the things about poetry is that the lines between different genres of poetry can be easily blurred. For example, you posted this in Lyric Poetry ...

Hey there Miss Slade! I quite like this but I feel like the formatting of this poem really messed it up. In my opinion, people should stick to stanzas, it ...

Hey there Merry! I am so excited to read this! A clear water droplet trickled down the window panel. The faster it came down the windowsill, the other droplets followed. ...

I know how that feels. I have over five ideas going and I still keep getting more. It's quite stress-inducing but in the end it'll pay off, hopefully. Good luck! ...

Hey Shina! You already got some good reviews, so I'm just going to talk about the content. I liked it, a lot. It had a message and it was powerful ...

Whah! Is this even...Pork? W-O-W *moment of silence* EPIC WIN. I really enjoyed this. It was dark and sick and funny, the type of story I needed at this time ...

Hey there Raymond! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death but everyone calls me Angel. Okay, I haven't written a poem in a while, but this used to be what ...

Okay, I'd rather read the rest of this then eat, cuz I have all the time in the world to eat, so here's the other half of my critique. One ...

Hey Jared! I'm so glad this is finally posted! By the way, I like how you have dictionary definitions at the beginning of each part. I watched the blood trickle ...

Ha! I think Lost has lost it. Just think, if she saw Henry Murdoch walking down the street she'd half faint from shock. :lol: But Henry is a good character. ...